The Art of Life - Comments

  • PierceMyHeart

    PierceMyHeart (150)

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    I like this poem, it describes life so fitting when, we are born we can become who and what we want to be. In some ways we hold the keys to our destiny. I love when you state in the poem we are brand new canvases. The experiences we go through in life are what define us and it will determine your outcome. From all the pain, joy, adventures, mistakes, etc at the end of our lives when we are remembered by our love ones and friends what is told is simply a masterpiece. Brilliant poem, and thanks for sharing!
    July 25th, 2014 at 09:07pm
  • PierceMyHeart

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    I like this poem, it describes life so fitting when, we are born we can become who and what we want to be. In some ways we hold the keys to our destiny. I love when you state in the poem we are brand new canvases. The experiences we go through in life are what define us and it will determine your outcome. From all the pain, joy, adventures, mistakes, etc at the end of our lives when we are remembered by our love ones and friends what is told is simply a masterpiece. Brilliant poem, and thanks for sharing!
    July 25th, 2014 at 09:07pm
  • ninahx

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    This is such a beautiful poem! The idea is unique, and the text just flows so smoothly.. This really made me smile. And this poem is, too, a masterpiece (: Recommended it!
    July 25th, 2014 at 12:00am