"Everyone Can See" - Comments

Cigarette Daydreamer (100)

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I love this!

October 9th, 2014 at 06:08pm

Meru21 (100)

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@ foREVer Remembered
Thank you very much. When it works, it works, you know? I agree with the rhythm, though. It was a little awkward for me at first, too. It's not more normal writing style, but I liked the way it came out.

September 1st, 2014 at 10:06pm

foREVer Remembered (100)

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Very beautiful, took a minute to get the rhythm of it but I love this. You are so young to feel such pain and loneliness, but damn girl you have quite the gift for poetry!

August 30th, 2014 at 07:55am

Meru21 (100)

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@ Anymouse
I'm glad you liked, and Sorry to hear we're in rather the same boat.

August 30th, 2014 at 06:03am

withupsofloating (100)

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I can relate to this much more than I'd like. Definite kick in the ass, great job.

August 29th, 2014 at 08:24am