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  • Lauren-Rose

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    No you're right, it did sound odd once I thought of it like that. I've changed it so hopefully it works better now. Thank you!
    September 5th, 2014 at 05:37am
  • Carboxyl

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    I like this poem. It is sad but a nice read. The only thing I would change is the "had of" part. Maybe not, though. I guess it sounds right. Maybe.
    September 5th, 2014 at 05:23am
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