Happily Broken - Comments

This is really good work. The poem is really good at evoking emotion. Usually I'd think there were too many 'fucking's, but it seemed to add a special rhythm to the poem. Nice work!

So I see someone really enjoyed the word 'fucking' in this. Lol. I do like this poem. I like the imagery in the words, and I like that I can relate in my own way. The second stanza is my favorite part. Good job.

I can dig this poem; I like angry things. One thing I would change though, is where you wrote "For fucking why?!" It doesn't sound right.