Sociopath - Comments

@ JuggaletteDown4life
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :D

@ HeartlessDemonz
Wow thanks! I'll definitely consider that :)

@ Lightmydarkness
Thanks, that's really useful :)

@The ShiningSoul I really love this I truly do but before you enter it I'm going to give a tiny bit of constructive criticism. When you write a rhyme try and make sure you don't rhyme the same words together to often, particularly in a poem with short lines. I just noticed with you do it with "it" a couple of times. Otherwise LOVE IT!!!

I think this was really good. The way it was structured really helped with the flow and the word choice was excellent. It really conveyed the feeling well. I think it would be great to enter into a school magazine. Good job.

Spectacular! I loved every word. Keep up the amazing work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.