Humanity - Comments

Whoa. There are so many questions unanswered in this poem; it's unbelievable that a short poem like this could leave me with so many questions, and so little answers. All I know is that something happened with her (something to do with water maybe?) and he tried to help her, but she died and they blamed him for it. Now that seriously sucks, that's for sure.

I think the one thing I don't like (and do at the same time) is that not much information is said in poems; only certain, important information is given, which is why I adore this poem so much. You only say that she died, he went to jail for it, and that he didn't do it. It just makes me wonder the whole story behind it. Wonderful job; I really did love this poem.

This is really interesting and I wish us readers were given more details. It sounds like the synopsis for a sci-fi novel~

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This! I really love this and get a sort of chill from it. It's hauntingly beautiful. And shows just how often we, as people, are mistaken.