The End of the World - Comments

Okubukai (100)

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when you imagine it..

the situation was creepy.. amazing..

and i say untitled..

P>S>.

amazingly dark

March 28th, 2009 at 09:18am

RoastedHeart (100)

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Whoa...you can imagine every detail of it,
I think if you tweaked the 8th stanza you could fit in the two liner so the rhyme scheme flows better if you know what i mean
but otherwise fantastic! :P

August 6th, 2008 at 09:08pm

Gibbers (150)

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cool, i'm pretty much obsessed with the end of the world, i write a lot of poems about it too

June 11th, 2008 at 07:55pm

Smiles :D (100)

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wow
may i ask wht inspired this one its so vivid and very good

love it and you
xx

May 6th, 2008 at 04:09pm

xteenagexnobodyx (100)

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okay now i can comment it :p
i love it :]
<3
xx

May 4th, 2008 at 02:15pm