Lying to Myself - Comments

  • Ghoul Scouts

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    This poem broke my heart. It was so beautifully written though. You are so talented!
    March 8th, 2017 at 12:36pm
  • KinokoNeko

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    good job
    February 9th, 2017 at 10:06am
  • Luis D.

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    intense.
    February 7th, 2017 at 11:14pm
  • Michael Westen

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    This was a bit painful to read as it hits home on hard to bear truths. I think the the first part of the last stanza are even tougher to handle than the more physical aspects in the second stanza.
    February 7th, 2017 at 08:41pm