Sit still. Silent. - Comments

Very nice.(:

lovely work. my favorite part was the ending. if it were spoken, it ended with a hushed silence. do you know what i mean?

anyway, great imagery, great thoughts. i loved how you focused on sitting and staying silent, that was a good focus point to have. the whole thing was very relatable. wonderful job!

that's how I felt with Jack [my boyfriend as of now] until I just went up to him one day and said "why are you so intoxicating, so disgustingly wonderful that I long for you and want you to be with me?" and yeah he looked a little freaked out but finally he said "Because you make me who I am so therefore I am yours." going strong for a year.