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  • Pandora Dragon

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    That was so incrediby deep I loved it! Great work, I could feel everything you described.
    August 5th, 2008 at 07:21am
  • Demel Kasumi

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    Wow. That was so deep. I could really feel your emotions. It made me feel really depressed...

    I LOVED IT!!!
    July 9th, 2008 at 12:47am
  • xoulovemeox

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    this is good
    May 29th, 2008 at 10:42pm
  • mellx39

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    You, or the speaker of the poem, definatly sounds angry and misunderstood. Try working a bit more with grammer.

    Don't worry, I'm not the best either.
    May 16th, 2008 at 11:55pm