Love+Hate=Tragedy - Comments

avadakedanielle (100)

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This is amazing, I really like it

November 17th, 2009 at 07:01am

masqued in black (100)

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ohh, i like this! :D

September 29th, 2009 at 08:06am

TheNewFoShizzle (200)

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I didn't really see the alliteration here. =/ Good rhyming scheme, though. And very descriptive with the emotions. I like how it progresses through the thought process and gives a strong view inside the mind of the character.

The main thing I noticed that could be improved upon (aside from the lack of alliteration--not a necessity for a poem, though it was for this contest) was that there wasn't really a steady rhythm, which I think kept it from flowing as well as it could have.

September 25th, 2009 at 06:27pm

BlueClawsx3RAWR (100)

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I AGREE WITH OTHER COMMENTER.
I love it. Its my total fav of urs.

August 2nd, 2008 at 06:24am

jadakiss (100)

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LOVE IT!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

June 12th, 2008 at 03:13am