I'm nothing - Comments

erm.. maybe ban?what does that mean :S lol

good poem

maegenmayhem is givin you good advice there :D

this is a really good poem fifi! Dont u just feel like writing depressing poems sometimes when u just feel fine! but pearls are wot i dont have

i dont have a reputation
and i dont have one pearl!
lol our song!



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pretty good.
the ryhmes are a little intense, though.
maybe bring them down a notch.
the ryhme pattern doesn;t have to be perfect,
by taking things out like "mum am i four" , just things to make it ryhme, but take away from the meaning of the poem, would make it alot better, more insightful.
it would give it more depth and meaning.

but good job.