Suicide In A Smile. - Comments

*sniff*
This poem rocks your rocking-ness out of the atmosphere
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Did that make any sense? Lol

I love the
'I'm dilapidated inside,
And I can no longer hide'

Ahh the poem is ALL amazing!
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the whole poem was amazzzing!!! but this is my fav.

"These papers have your name written many times,
But wants more important, is written between the lines,
These suicidal smile covers up the pain,
And all I can do is hope that I'm still sane."
again, great job!! :D

I love the ending.

"Lets see if you can find whats true, because I'm dying for you"
Do you mind if I put that up on my profile? Credit to you, of course.

I write letters you won't read,
I write them in the blood that I bleed

Everyone goes through this time where they are so mad, angry, just PISSED that they wish they could express their anger this way...props to you for actually doing it!

wow, i really really like this one. im sure a lot of people can relate to this, as well as me.. =D.

I really like this!!

My gosh this is good, I really like it

Beatiful, I love it It's so breath taking all your poems are, I have trouble figuring out what to say. You are truely talented

This is absolutely incredible. <3

wow!this is really good!