Woh.
This is so good.
It's really dark and the stanza about the shooting has a really destructive, erratic feel to it but that's nicely contrasted by the seeming calmness of that last stanza.
You've done a great job :)
xxx
dude this is unbielivabley good no affence to other people but most of the poems here lack talent this is deep and i dont even know this is one quality poem
so basically I have a very messed up mind, but this is how it worked out in my head. No I was not invloved in a school shooting but it was a pretty vivid dream.