My suicide note - Comments

  • carareignsDEATH

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    this was amazing :'3
    April 4th, 2011 at 04:41pm
  • deathbatchick6661

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    wow. thats amazing. like a twisted todays romeo and juliet.
    September 26th, 2009 at 04:26am
  • Kismet

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    I love it...It's twisted, but in a beautiful way
    July 15th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • Shadow Spirit

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    Woh.
    This is so good.
    It's really dark and the stanza about the shooting has a really destructive, erratic feel to it but that's nicely contrasted by the seeming calmness of that last stanza.
    You've done a great job :)
    xxx
    February 18th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • xxDeliciousLoserxx

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    wow, it was pritty sweet.....it was dark and almost evil(not sure why)....but i really liked it. its one of the better poems i've ever read.
    November 5th, 2008 at 07:32am
  • Shad.Shadows

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    wicked i luv it its so....... twisted its........great and.....unbelievably amazing.
    September 5th, 2008 at 09:50pm
  • ThexVampiresxKiss

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    Very good, but twisted, yes.
    August 4th, 2008 at 07:14am
  • dirvi

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    woah ... this was amazingly good.
    full of emotion and, i dunno. distrubing, but i really liked it!! :)
    August 1st, 2008 at 11:04pm
  • s...................

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    dude this is unbielivabley good no affence to other people but most of the poems here lack talent this is deep and i dont even know this is one quality poem
    July 30th, 2008 at 07:34am
  • xXxMaggotxXx

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    wow. this is awesome. its so.........i dunno whats the word im looking for.....twisted? anywhoo i loved it =D.
    July 27th, 2008 at 06:35am
  • serenailith

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    this was amazing.
    seriously i liked it
    July 25th, 2008 at 01:04am
  • Rosalie Hale

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    That is an AWESOME poem!! I'm jelous, I can never make one that good!!
    July 23rd, 2008 at 08:19pm
  • acrylicpencil

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    i liked it =D
    July 22nd, 2008 at 03:47pm
  • Changed.

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    lol, I couldn't stop laughing.

    That's what I call sick-- Laughing.
    July 22nd, 2008 at 03:06pm
  • Shylaaaaa

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    so basically I have a very messed up mind, but this is how it worked out in my head. No I was not invloved in a school shooting but it was a pretty vivid dream.
    July 22nd, 2008 at 02:45pm