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  • HeavensStarlessEyes

    HeavensStarlessEyes (100)

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    This is beautiful.

    I especially loved the simile 'My light inside is fading, like a slowly dying candle.'
    T'was beautiful.

    Write more.

    And post your other ones. They're really freaking good.

    xxxxxxxxx
    August 30th, 2008 at 10:03am
  • AniRawr

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    .................nice =)
    and u told me that it was crap! >:) tut tut tut :P! hehehe
    July 29th, 2008 at 02:49pm
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