Silver Lining - Comments

this ones really good and cliche was a great rhyme

What do you mean, saying you're not a good poet?! I like it-- it's a bit quirky but I like your voice-- it just needs some developing-- try some more complex rhymes-- I actually always use a rhyming dictionary-- rhymezone.com is good!-- I like how you rhymed cliche though-- that's more complex than most of the rest of your rhymes