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likely lads (100)

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There is lots of emotion here, no doubt.
The rhyming was okay, it was a bit etchy at some points, but all in all, it was a good poem.

May 27th, 2007 at 06:20am
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*applause* Great job, love the flow of it. There's a lot of emotion in your writing, keep it up!

May 26th, 2007 at 12:42am

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