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  • gdaywolfbane

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    the emotion in this poem was mind-blowing. Awesome use of emotion, so keep writing!
    June 30th, 2007 at 06:07pm
  • Greese Lightning

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    Really [b]loved it how[/b] you showed your emotion yet you allowed the rhyming to quickly stay.
    It was worth reading. good job XD[b]The End.[/b]
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:04pm
  • swollen.and.small

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    i love your writing
    May 31st, 2007 at 03:43am
  • likely lads

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    The way that this doesn't rhyme, really works for it.
    It flows quite nicely.
    The only thing that I can criticize is that it had a few gramatical errors, other than that, you're very talented.
    May 27th, 2007 at 06:08am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Great job, I really like your writing. I just love the flow of it! And I can relate to it too!
    May 26th, 2007 at 03:31am
  • warning-nimrod!

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    really cool poem! =]
    May 11th, 2007 at 02:07am
  • Catastrophic Dreams

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    I liked it
    May 8th, 2007 at 01:10pm
  • buried_in_memory

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    I'm in love with this!
    May 8th, 2007 at 06:14am
  • narcotics

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    That is Good poem!
    May 8th, 2007 at 05:37am
  • furfur

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    ahh
    its sounds like another poem agian
    i like it tho
    but what's wrong
    or was this just done out of bordom?
    May 8th, 2007 at 05:28am
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