She's So Pretty - Comments

very colourful.
Just thought i'd go back and read this :3
I really do envy your talent; I haven't been able to write a poem in months :(

There's an anger and hate written in this poem that is portrayed so well. It almost comes across as the narrator being a total creep saying "she's so pretty" throughout the poem, but that's not a bad thing at all, haha, I just think the emotion in this makes it seem more unrealistic. But that's not a bad thing either.

I love how this flows togethe so well, and the part about playing violin with your wrists was just, awesome. This reminds me of a song from Atreyu...anywase, great poem.

hey awsome structre and love the metaphores how long does it take you to write somthing like this?

WOW.
that was amazing.
you should write a book.
:)

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i think my brains gonna explode,,,, the music that i was listening to and this just didn't mix....
IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! I LURV YOUR STUFF!!!!!