Hiding in the Exosphere - Comments

I think it's beautiful, and that the scientific aspect just gives a hard silver gleam to it's beauty...

This poem made me laugh, haha, sorry but it really did. Probably because I could see it being written for a science class and the teacher instantly giving fame to the author (you) haha. Yeah. I like how it all comes together though, like each stanza is a seperate piece of a puzzle and they all fit perfectly at the end.

ha its great rly i don't have much time to finish this class is almost ovr srries

I love this its a bit long yet you keep the readers attention. Well done and well written. (that and your user name is awesome) Thanks for writing this it was a joy to read.

- The Crayon Eater