Downhill - Comments

like the others said, great poem
also, i like how it's labled "downhill" and the length of the times gets smaller as you go. i was wanting to write something like that where it's an addition to the visual as well as it goes with the theme of the poem

I love the poems you write
Their always just....short but perfect
a lot of meaning ^_^
And for some reason....that poem reminded me of some song lyrics from 3 Chrs Fr Sweet Revenger

Once again, you have invaded my head and stolen my thoughts, then put them into poem format. I swear we must be related; this is disturbingly coincidental. This is what I was thinking when I wrote my most recent poem. I love how you've written this and it makes perfect sense. I always love reading your poems. Much like CyanideandHappiness.

I really love your poems.
You area really great writer.
I read them backwards, from the last one up to this one.
They are all awesome in their own ways.
I love reading and writing.
Im sick of reading stories and poems that are poorly written and your poems surely do [b]not[/b] fit into that category.
Great job!!
WOO!