Voices obeyed - Comments

Pretty breathtaking,
wait no. . . even better than breathtaking, I'm gonna make a word just to describe this poem,

So-breathtaking-I-nearly-passed-out.

But seriously, really awesome!

There was something about this poem that got me. That's why it won 2nd place. Sorry it didn't get 1st. I couldn't chose. It was so hard.
I love this poem. You are a great writer, don't stop. :]

I haven't been able to relate to a poem as well as this. Very well done.
Keep up the good work!

thats like hermia's last day in the asylum!!!