Together, Forever Missing - Comments

Rain dancer (100)

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wow your poem is superb. i thoroughly enjoyed it

August 21st, 2009 at 08:00pm

Berry.Berry.Love. (100)

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wow, i havent read your poems in a while, but yet again, brilliant.
:)
you ar really talented.
love them.
:)

xxx

January 2nd, 2009 at 11:31pm

The Rude German (105)

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it sounds more like a song to me...a sad ballad...it's like I hear the music in the background while I'm reading it...and the discontinuous ryme schema is very interesting...although i don't understand it all but that's just cause english isn't my native language...keep on writing stuff like that!xD

December 25th, 2008 at 08:43am

Fantasies Escape (100)

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It definatly sticks to the name, and I like that. Its got good sized stanza's and it has a great flow. Kudo's my friend, you have a great poetic side.

December 25th, 2008 at 04:36am