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  • LiSwtSLaS

    LiSwtSLaS (100)

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    Beautiful. It seems simple and elegant yet it still makes your reader think about what they are reading. I love the picture it creates in your mind and most of all the very last line. Thank you for writing this.

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    January 21st, 2009 at 11:20pm
  • Stellaluna

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    I like this. But does it mean that she's passed away or that they've broken up? Or am I [i]completely[/i] off?
    January 21st, 2009 at 08:22pm
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