What Happened To The Photograph Your Boyfriend Took (An Hourglass Poem) - Comments

it's so moving...i really like this poem

wow this is amazing
and deep
it made me cry
and i never cry so this is pretty big
oh i'm natalie btw
check out my poems
they're not nearly as good but i could use some criticism

wow this is amazing
and deep
it made me cry
and i never cry so this is pretty big
oh i'm natalie btw
check out my poems
they're not nearly as good but i could use some criticism

I really like this. amazing.

It's sad, but it's hopeful too. I really love the whole shape thing you've got going there! It really matches with the poem! Great job. You always amaze me, Megan :mrgreen: