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  • souffrir de amour.

    souffrir de amour. (150)

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    really nice poem!
    i really like this one!
    January 6th, 2009 at 02:15pm
  • what the chipmunk?

    what the chipmunk? (100)

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    There are some very snazzy quirks to this... "Your hydrogen to my oxygen", I really like that, and it fits really nicely until "Silliness is our motto", but that's probably just me being difficult. But yeah, aforementioned line stuck in my head as pure snazz ^_^
    January 5th, 2009 at 08:32pm