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  • Pseudonym

    Pseudonym (100)

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    "his bullets are just present tense; they're words, there's more without them"
    geeeeeeeeeeeeenious :)
    What about saying "And OUT goes my candle" at the end?
    May 2nd, 2008 at 05:28pm
  • Disenchanted Babe

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    Nice, very well expressed, keep up the good work!!! Nice!. Clap
    June 14th, 2007 at 11:09pm
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