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Rorzshach (100)

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i love itttttttttttttttt

May 16th, 2014 at 01:55am
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I really like this. I've never read a poem like this, about how two sides of you good and evil like this. great job =]
and I can totally relate X)

March 7th, 2010 at 06:25pm
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I'd suggest separating some lines into stanzas and stuff.
It'd make it more effective.

But, apart from that, I think it was quite good.

January 25th, 2009 at 12:41am
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this was rather good

January 25th, 2009 at 12:37am

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