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  • Rorzshach

    Rorzshach (100)

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    i love itttttttttttttttt
    May 16th, 2014 at 01:55am
  • roxsoxx

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    I really like this. I've never read a poem like this, about how two sides of you good and evil like this. great job =]
    and I can totally relate X)
    March 7th, 2010 at 06:25pm
  • junioramazon.

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    I'd suggest separating some lines into stanzas and stuff.
    It'd make it more effective.

    But, apart from that, I think it was quite good.
    January 25th, 2009 at 12:41am
  • We're Pretending

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    this was rather good
    January 25th, 2009 at 12:37am
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