That was AWESOME. Lovely rose/love metaphor you got going on! :D
Though I wish the last part (ground & life) rhymed. Other than that...
AMAZING!!! X]]]
Good luck for the contest, btw. X]
This is amazing, makes mine sound ametur.
I'm writing a poem called Fallen Petals, but I'm not copying yours in anyway. ^__^
Again, completly breath-taking.