Incredible and beautiful. I loved how you made me look far beyond the image you have chosen for inspiration. It was simply lovely how you introduced me this new place. I also enjoyed the few rhymes that you added here and there; I hate it when the entire poem is saturated with rhymes; it just seems to forced and out of place. But you, my friend, made an incredible poem that sounded just perfect and kept a steady beat.
I would have enjoyed reading far more than just these few stanzas, tho.
Anyways, congratulations for such an amazing poem.