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that was amazing. i love the rhyming part it just fits so well with the whole text and just WOW...

i really like the way it rhymes and stuff so simple yet complex and beautiful.

I like the rhyming in this poem as it fits
in some poems it just sounds forced and all
you pull it off
the poem was really sad..but I liked it because it was different to all of the other suicide poems on mibba that just seem to follow the same pattern

I love this one, for some odd reason I love writing suicide poems.

whoa just wow - i love it - its different - the ones i used to read - well ppl usually right abotu slittign their qrists - howvere this is different - i love it - and ur amzing!! i mean writer - im not flirting :)
oh god im beign wierd again so ill stop there
but overall thsi poem is blooomign fabulastic!!
very well done maaam

xx keep it coming - i want moorrrreee :D

yay people like it XD

I liked it... I liked the rhymes and... hell, I liked it all! It's awesome^^

>.< XD thanks!!!

thats soooo good

stupid double post

[quote="lyrical_lies"][quote="Russell - RWO"] this makes no sense to me whatsoever[/quote]your wrong ,
its amazing ,seriously fuck!
no wonder theres like a million comments
everyone loves it
it rocks

[/b] :hug:[/quote]

thankyou so much !!!! XD
every comment means alot!!!! :D

[quote="Russell - RWO"] this makes no sense to me whatsoever[/quote]your wrong ,
its amazing ,seriously fuck!
no wonder theres like a million comments
everyone loves it
it rocks

[/b] :hug:

ok ! i will send it to you right away :D XD

Yeah, sure. =]
Send away!

I enjoy reading poetry so, it would be a pleasure!!

well if you want i will send it to you?
and i think your feedback is great!
i like people to comment on it.
XD

=]
I'd gladly give you feedback!

I'm not very well at it though.. [sucky English and all]

And.. I rhyme in most of my poems. I'm used to it. ;]
I like it therefor.
And if you like it, and if it gives you pleasure or satisfaction writing it, just write!
It's a good thing to write. =]

thanks!!!!! not many people like the rhyming...

ive wrote another one, but im waiting for someone to give me feedback on it
before i post it...
:D :D XD XD

I actually really like how this poem is set up.
Just look at the meter or how do you call that? The amount of sillables in a line.. To make it sound a little better.

But I still really like it. It's a tough job writing a poem like this and making it sound so good and even rhyme.

Really well done! =]

crazy?!? :|

WhOa....


CRAZY!!