A Cry For Help - Comments

Wow. Very good, and very true! :)

Wow.. That was really good. And sooo true! I know i can relate to it. I agree, I think this can help people, so many people think that they are alone with what they are going through. I know I did. But now I know that Im not, and am glad I fought like hell not to do anything extreme. We need to get people to talk about it, I know its really freaking hard to do, but getting it out helps sooo much. Especially when you talk to some one that maybe you dont know, that is also going through it.

It def. says something and could really make some people think about how they treat other people. good job steph.

Like said before, many times, It's deep and straight to the point.
This could actually help alot for people.

I love it,so detailed and so true.

Keep up the fab work!!
Much love
x x x

I already commented and read this, but you know... that was a sorry excuse for a comment. So I want to give you one that actually has a value to anything, my goal is to your pride and letting you know how good of a job you've done on this poem- how much it's true and how many people should read it just to get the point of how suicide or self harm are stupid, little, easy, selfish ways of getting out of you problems when there are so many other available roads you can trudge through to make it out of your issues. Because as that Rise Against song matches in the play list, [i] we've all been sorry, we've all been hurt... but how we survive is what makes us who we are.[/i] And that's a true statement. Not one person hasn't felt pain of life, and had to pull through their hard times. Even the happiest rich kid's grandma died, giving them the pain that the orphan child feels, but to different extents. Well done in explaining the truth behind self harm and the harm others have done unto our souls.

Oh. And you wrote "scares" instead of "scars."

good job.
<3

Wow that was deep. It was amazing.

wow, I just read the whole thing and ....wow thats awesome!

I've been saying that to my friend all along
let me show her

BEAUTIFUL.

wow
such an amazing message
I really think this poem could actually help people in this situation
carry on with what you are doing, it's great

Did you type this?

...
no way!
it's soooo detailed and sooo deep that it's impossible to believe a person can know such feelings...thats truely deep that it scares me.

That is the cold hard truth right there.
Love it. 100 out of 5 stars.

Amazing. Honest and amazing =]

wow, I just realized you posted this on my b-day

This is really amazing!!! 0_0 you know when I was reading it my eyes are glued to the screen.

Wow, Steph. *hugs* It's amazing. And well, as they said. "True".

It's to the point, and it doesn't "beat around the bush".

i like how it was assertive...not...waaaaah...u know? im not good at getting this out, i know...but....u actaully make a point without trying to appeal to my pity or by grossing me out with overly graphic descriptions. love it.

I really liked this. I thought that not only was it deep, it was honest without being "pity me, please".
This is such a tricky subject and not many people can write in such a mature manner like you did.

^^Um, the others kinda said it all.
Really good! True, true, true.

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