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  • Graffiti

    Graffiti (100)

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    Thanks! :) I'll try that.
    January 21st, 2007 at 09:02pm
  • SaintEMber

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    wow i really like this. I love the rhyming pattern and how it all fits together, it's really smoothe. But just a suggestion: maybe you could count your sylables to make them all a little more even so it flows even better :mrgreen:
    January 21st, 2007 at 07:08pm
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