The Last Person to Live - Comments

Wow! when I read it, I thought it was written by a known writer. I started looking at the bottom for the name of the writer and it was written by you! You are an incredible writer! Keep it up! you know how to put all the words in the perfect place and some how still make it all rhyme

wow, i knew you could write a good story but this was fantastic, and it was very different from a lot of the poems I've read, which is always good

It was a great poem.

Interesting poem. It kind of reminds me of I Am Legend.

Here are some grammar points:

"giving one last breathe," -> breathe is the verb; breath is the noun
"People were dieing everyday and all around him," -> dying, "every day"
"a moments last plea." -> moment's

that was awesome i liked it

i hope im not the last person to die, the world could end tomorrow -shrugs- who knows

told you il read it dint i?