You asked me to read and help, so here I am:
It's good, very good.
I like it.
Poems don't need to rhyme
Some of mine 'Loneliness', '3 Parallel Cuts' etc. don't.
Spelling is a bit off though...
The last bit is a bit weird
If you'd like me to explain then I will try (:
It's good, very good.
I like it.
Poems don't need to rhyme
Some of mine 'Loneliness', '3 Parallel Cuts' etc. don't.
Spelling is a bit off though...
The last bit is a bit weird
If you'd like me to explain then I will try (:
..x