Forgiveness and Forgetfulness - Comments

I like how you had the theme of blame and human nature in this poem. Very nice! :)

A lesson I have to say I learned the very hard way. A lesson God made sure to show me, but for me I took it differently and though my grudges aren't un-justfyied, there is no use to hold unto something that hinders me and who I'll become.

i lyk it
n ur rite
with da moral
who wudda thought
dat is til u luk at realli denu c it

I loved this. The moral is undenyabely true.

Sooo true
I love this
It's beautifully written and the moral is true with everybody, no matter how much we try to deny it