The Beach - Comments

I think I can see this turning into a song.

I agree with unlucky clover

i like that poem had some briiliant parts

[i]So as I stand here staring, with both my feet in the sand,

I try to tell you through my mind that I'm someone who can understand

I try to tell you that I'm worth your time, even if it was just for a while

But you just return a glance and show off you're brightest smile. [/i]

Best lines. :)