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  • pronetobeingalone

    pronetobeingalone (100)

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    I like this poem, especially your use of brackets and ellipsis, it added an element of dissarray to the poem which i liked. keep one wrinting! :) bl00dcurs3dxo
    March 27th, 2011 at 11:16pm
  • eeeee

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    "You're all I want.
    You're all I see.
    It's like a drug.
    Addictive, but you're killing me"

    my favorite bit
    April 4th, 2009 at 02:44pm
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