February 6th, 2011 at 04:49am
Actually, they left out a lot of the books in the movies.
I found that this review was lacking a little bit. A lot of it seemed very general feedback, you seemed amazed at everything which is very well expressed, but that was about it. You didn't look at the positives and negatives of a lot of things.
Maybe for future reviews, you might write more cleanly if you seperate it into parts. So look at the plot, look at acting, look at the sets, etc.
Reviewing all three movies is really hard to do in depth. It could've been better if you focused on one.
A couple of lines didn't seem right to put in a review.
[i]Hopefully, they got paid well[/i]
[i]and how do the actors know what to do and where to do it and HOW to do it?[/i]
They aren't really necessary to the piece of writing. You hsould try to focus more on giving feedback than just saying how amazed you are.
Your conclusion could also use some work. Ending with a bunch of questions isn't the best way to wrap up a review. It didn't really have anything to do with the movie either.
I apologise if i sound too critical, but I think that there is definitely potential for a good review, you just need to work on what you put in it.
The first time I got distracted and the second time I got through half the extended version of the first film and stopped.
Fail. xD