Fifty Shades Of Grey: Maybe It Should Have Stayed Fanfiction? - Comments

I giggled at every point you made considering you and I had exactly the same opinions while reading it.
Except there was the part in the book where she was like "He broke through my first vaginal wall" or SOMETHING along the lines of touching her "vaginal wall." And I just...died of laughter. It was too much for me.

I downloaded a sample for my Kindle and after that, I just put it down. I didn't want to pick it up. She rolled her eyes SO many times and all the "Holy Cow" stuff was just.... not for me. I'm really glad I didn't waste my money on that. Lol
Great article, by the way. (: Very well written!

Absolutely great review. I've been considering picking it up and reading it considering how many people have been going on about it but thanks to you I will not be wasting my money on such a think.
Very well written article, I'm impressed. Great Job!

This article was just so much fun to read and superbly written. I was interested in the series, because I write fan-fiction (though I've moved onto an active Harry Potter fic) and wanted to know why this author got her work published should I wish to do the same. I knew it would be awful - the writer said so herself! And it was based on very vapid, self-involved, boring characters so I kinda guess Ana would be a Mary-Sue!
Excellent article!

I am in love with this article. I agree on all points and applaud you for stating them so clearly and concisely.

Excellent job!

I don't know, it sounds like a mixture of Twilight, Vampire Academy series, and The Sookie Stackhouse series. Well I don't know much about twilight, but a vampire in VA name Christian Ozera seem's more like the character in Fifty shades. And well The sookie Stackhouse because my mom said it has smut in it.