Eh...the article wasn't too badly written. I would suggest getting rid of the italics though. Most of the review was in italics and it made it sort of hard to read.
I can't really speak or understand Spanish so I probably will never watch that show. Still...I like the fact that you mentioned it. If I ever become bilingual, I'll be sure to check it out. =)
Granted, I'm not really fond of telenovelas. In fact, I despise most of them, except for Betty la Fea, but I can honestly tell you that this review drags on too much.
It actually bores you instead of making you want to watch it.
A little less description could avoid that and stop people from getting confused by the common messy formula of a telenovela.