I really hope this story doesn't end up as one of the thousands on Mibba forgotten about and doomed to remain unfinished.... Its far too good for that cruel fate.
September 26th, 2014 at 11:32am
I'm only 10 chapters in and already loving it! Just wanted to let you know that and make a couple more comments before I get back to reading.
I love that you spent time building up the original character and the fictional band before starting to introduce any famous characters. I only have two pieces of critizim, it can sometime be hard to tell who you are referring to when you say he or she. Its also a little hard to get an idea about the personalities or looks of the original characters (beyond Jake's multi-coloured hair. Itd be awesome if there was a character page/tab with a pic and a bit about the original character.
They're just little things that I've though about while reading this, for all I know you might have addressed them as the story goes on.
Anyway really love your work so far! I'm gonna get back to reading!
