Jaded by Bright Colors and Faded Walls - Comments, page 2

animeQT613 (100)

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I forgot about this then just found it again and fell in love all over again and I am on my knees begging PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! XD

September 11th, 2010 at 03:25am

dappleddreams (100)

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The last two chapters were pretty funny. Poor Jade, that must've been so awkward!
I can't wait until you update! :)

August 7th, 2010 at 08:57am

flawedrainbow (100)

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please update soon?
this is the best story I've ever read on here :D
x

May 31st, 2010 at 03:28am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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I wish you would update soon..

:D

May 4th, 2010 at 12:14am

Santimadeitbetter (100)

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hahaha! those boys have a wild imagination XD
i guess kudos for hayley? hahaha!

April 5th, 2010 at 01:33am

rivals are insane (100)

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i just found this and it is AMAZING :D
love it so much, im subscribing :D

April 4th, 2010 at 12:28am

Harley.Quinn (100)

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poor guys.

March 22nd, 2010 at 11:52pm

Myssa is stellar (100)

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Hahaha, I never thought that Hayley would be the person to explain sex to Jade. This was great. :D

March 22nd, 2010 at 01:01am

pyromaniac123 (100)

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i would comment that perhaps it should be explained to Jade that that is how baby's are made?

AMAZING STORY!
if you want me to beta it for you i would be willing to. ^^

March 17th, 2010 at 06:06am

samiiRAWR (100)

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Oh dear.
Awww. Poor Jade. She's so innocent.
Hayley broke her innocence xDD
Haha. They do have super sonic moan detecting ears :P

March 16th, 2010 at 04:53am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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"Could've swore I heard moaning"
lol that was funny.
I loved it as always! :))
Hope you update again soon.

March 16th, 2010 at 12:45am

allison wonderland (100)

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SEX
Hahahahah God, I wish that was how I learned about sex.

March 15th, 2010 at 11:08pm

BabyHazelEyes (100)

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oh gosh.
This chapter was hysterical
Write more?

March 15th, 2010 at 06:20pm

Charlie.. (100)

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They're totally imagining it.

March 15th, 2010 at 09:29am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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i lovee it! update soon?
:))))

March 6th, 2010 at 02:31am

Harley.Quinn (100)

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poor william...

March 2nd, 2010 at 05:04am

animeQT613 (100)

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LOVE THE UPDATE!!!!!!! IT MADE MY DAY!!!

March 2nd, 2010 at 02:40am

Myssa is stellar (100)

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I absolutely love this story! Its so different, and has a great plot.

March 2nd, 2010 at 01:51am

Mikey Whiskey Hands. (100)

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aww will feels like a pedophile :(( i think it's kinda funnyy. anywayyy i lovee It!

March 1st, 2010 at 02:34pm

heartbreakisforever (100)

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I feel sorry for William, feeling like a pedophile. But I think things will get better with time. Like Dan says, Jade is maturing a lot, which is a good thing :).
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

February 28th, 2010 at 05:02pm