What's That Saying About Life and a Box of Chocolates? - Comments

awww it made me laugh!!!

heehee damn that was really frigin long!!!

can't wait for more though!!!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!

lol.
Your mind is just like mine. ha.
Dirty but funny all at the same time. YAY! (claps for you!!!)

Update soon please and thankyou!

I loved the update
really great

“Would stop being such a moron?” Dean faced me and stared. “I came here because I wanted to make some kind of truce. But I can see that’s not going to happen.” * Missing the word 'you'

“You damn right.” Dean glared and I sighed. *Doesn't make sense...

“Dean, look at yourself. You’re being so selfish right now.” I got up and glared at him. “Hate me all you want. Fuck I don’t care if you punch me in the face, but you know that’ll only hurt Jess. And while you’re having this pity party, a little boys waiting for you to be there with him. He wants you there. Hate me all you want but don’t disappoint a little boy you claim to love.” *missing an apostrophy... or is it suppose to be like that :3

“What a load of crap.” Dean snorted. “You left for yourself. You left so you didn’t have to put up with the troubles of pregnancy and being a father. You left her for the bright lights and pretty woman of LA.” It was instinct, an instant reaction. In one instance Dean was holding his bleeding nose and I was shaking my sore hand out. *plural - women.

The guy was being a prick, but he was only trying to do what he thought was best for Jess and Jackson; keep them from getting hurt. *change to keeping? Maybe, your choice :D

“I little bit.” I laughed. *Change to A

“…Are you trying to tell me my calls annoy you? Are you dumping me?” He sounded hurt. No mistakes but this made me laugh so hard xD I can imagine Rob do the expression over the phone xDD Nicely done (:

“Pattinson? Edward Cullen? God he’s so dreamy.” She swooned right in front of me making my eyes grow in shock. “I’d have his babies.”

“Excuse me?” I choked on my intake of air and coughed; staring at her. Ha ha, no mistakes again - but this nice! Ha ha, especially what Jess said: 'I'd have his babies.' And Jackson went into shock! Ha ha, seriously - the atmosphere you created in this scene and conversation was perfect and vivid xDD

“Sorry, but it’s just the Cullen kids.”

“Well no eating the neighbors pets.” Jess giggled.

“I can think of something I’d rather be eating.”

“Jackson!” She gasped and splashed the water and bubbles at me.

“I was talking about the cake in the fridge, Jesus get your head out of the gutter!” I laughed and flicked her with the tea towel. No mistakes, but another piece of conversation they had I love xDD

Once again, I love this chapter, love. Really - lengthy, but GREAT UPDATE! omfg! I love all your updates :D

So this update definitely made me laugh with all the damn sexual innuendo between Jess and Jack. That was hysterical. Real couples have had that conversation about their children walking in on them making the next baby. ha.

So this update made me smile. I loved it! =] I can't wait for more.

Aws!
I love it.
More soon.

AWWWWW LIL JACKSON IS SOOO BOSS !!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story is so adorable

Dean's not going to be come a killer is he?...
I DON'T WANT HIM TO DIE!!!

I like this part 'That’s not a threat either. It’s a promise' I can picture him smirking down at Jackson. Love it! <3 Mai

this is such an adorable story I love it!!!!! and lil Jack is just the cutest thing I can imagine! I almost cried when he told Jack what he wished for. Great update! you're such a good writer!!!!!!!

love you.

awww, this is heaps cute.

Aww, little Jackson is adorable! (:
I lovee this story!
Update soon!
- Kristine <3

Aww. Lil' Jackson is so cute.

NICE!!
hahah dean is acting like a dick.
anyways i like the chapter
all the chapters are always amazing.

oooh, fiesty.
The mood towards the middle, was very convincing and very vivid.
Nicely done. The part with Dean and Jackson reminded me of
Jacob's and Edward's scene in Eclipse.
Especially the line with Dean and 'pickin up the pieces of her broken heart.'
I really like that. Once again, you really out did yourself with updates.
You're talented.

And I bet the next chapter is super de duper amazing again :D

This is adorable.
I love it.
More very soon please.
:D

Aww, this was cute. Dean's being a douche but it was cute to see Jack and Jackson together. The wish was seriously so freaking adorable. Amazing update as always. I can't wait for the next! =]

gah this story AMAZES me I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!

I can't wait for more!!!

haha aww mini jack attack is the cutest thing ever. :)

and;

“Oh and Jess.” She turned and looked up at me with a questioning glance. “I love you more then anything in this world.”

what a friggen cassanova haha :)

loved it!