Oh man. I'm only on chapter seven and I must say I am hooked.
I think it is just hilarious how you portray Joe as an avid Mibba reader because you've gotten it down right to the tee! And I just find it so funny how he just keeps digging deeper and deeper holes for himself. Ahhahha. Oh man. It's so funny right now that I can't even laugh, and I don't think that has EVER happened to me before.
I've read a lot of JB stories but I must say, this is way unique! And I've always wondered if they even know about fan fictions and if they do, I wonder if they actually do just log on to see what the comotion is all about. And this just feeds into that completely and wholeheartedly.
I love where you're going! Great job and definitely keep up the good work! (=
I just finished reading the story tonight and I love it! You're such a great writer and keep readers wanting more! This is such a different Jonas Brothers story and I could not stop laughing throughout the entire thing. All the little lines and Josie! Ha! I couldn't stop laughing at that and Devi is such a fantastic writer and I'm addicted to her stories also.
I just wanted to shake Joe a few times as it was such an 'I told you so' after what happened at the resturaunt, but I really did feel bad for him though. He was really trying to do good but it kind of turned out badly with the lying part. And Demi Lavato in the story is way too much fun. "Don't fall for teh puppy eyes and the sniffle!" I couldn't stop laughing at the part. I mean, what girl would not fall for that?!
But you are so keeping me on the edge of my seat right now wanting more and the next update to come out fast! I wanna see what happens at the concert and what Demi has is mind! Please update soon!