Every Mistake That I Make - Comments

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awesome story!!
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Yayyy I'm pleased you like it and I'm pleased you feel that way, because thats exactly how I wanted people to see Mikey :]

Thanks :]

grrr the self centered bastard!! dallas can do better than him, any day!!
keep this coming :D:D

This is good, she could do something totally brazen and snog the pants of Mikey and hope he liked it...
keep this coming, it's great :D:D

:] Thanks soooo much. I'll be writing today, probably, which means I might update today or tomorrow. One of the two.

Thanks again <3

pretty awesome x_x

Wow, I'm so glad I'm not Dallas.
Thats a really hard situation to deal with!
But I love how she kept considering murdering that Rachel girl in the slowest, most painful way possible XP
Amazing chapter, as usual.
DEFINATELY UPDATE SOON!

: D Thanks! I'm just hoping this story makes sense. I had to edit a lot so it did make sense ¬_¬ That chapter tbh wasn't as I planned it to be originally, but I think it works better than my original idea which was just too complicated and didn't make much sense.

I'll be writing tonight :]

Gah, Mikey's such as ass!!
Keep it coming, this is great :D:D

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Thanks ^_^ I'll try.
And I appreciate that because I wasnt so keen on chapter 4 for some reason so thanks <3

Why can't Mikey see?? Ugh, boys are so dumb!!
this is good, keep it coming please :D:D

Thanks :] I'm really going to try and update this again soon.

I was just wondering, 'cos it could have swung either way; but it's better as this.
It's really good, keep it coming. I like it :D:D

Thanks, both of you :]

And as for the question, he's meant to be jealous of Gerard.

So is he jealous of Racheal or of Gerard?
This has potential, and good English - keep it up...

this is pretty cool so far.
Continue?