Things Are Shaping up to Be - Comments

I love you writing. Im completely addicted and finished all of it in one day. Your a great writer! I hate Jake... well I think most of us do... lol :)

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't think that that quite covers the joy that I'm experiencing from those last lines, but that's about all I can handle at the moment. :D!!!!
As much as I hate the getting high thing I really love those lines. I hope that things will work out for Ryan because the smoking... I don't know. I know that it happens, and I'm not naive enough to say that no one does it, but I really wish that there were better things.
And... I love them... I love them lots! :D!!!

I love this so much! The idea is more than amazing and it's just so cute. I love that you started from when they were so young, it's just so different from most Rydon's. But Jake is such a bitch, how could anyone want to hurt Ry? :| Butt, I LOVE Brendon in this story. He's just too sweet. Aha, I can't wait for the next update though, I'm really into this story.

I fucking hate Jake. Little duchebag. (Just finished ch.39)

Oh my goodness!! I missed the last chapter!! how did that happen mibba? hmmm? Care to explain yourself?
I'll stop now. That's amazing! :D!! AWww, Brendon's such a sweetheart. I love how happy they are with each other around ;) You know what that means. :D!! And awww, Mrs. Urie, I mean Grace... wait mom! Ahhh!! ahahaha, so cute!!! <3!!
I love them!
And ahhh!!! Panic!
I'm going to miss you by a few days sad to say. I hope you have lotses of fun!!! :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jake needs to back the fuck off Ryan's dick. Dear lord. If i could strangle story characters, I would squeeze the life out of Jake.

YAY!!! You updated :D this makes me happy.
Pleeeeeeaaaase update sooner than may. I'll be your bestest friend. Haha.
IM GONNA SEE PANIC! TOO!!!!! but our concert's this saturday. And it's a festival :P but who cares cuz it's FREEEEEE!!!! benefits of living in Houston I guess. Heheh. Yeah right. I hate it here -.-
ANYWAAAAAAYS, I love this frickin story sooooo much. Everytime you update I scream cause it means I get to read amazing AWESOMENESS! please update soon.

Brendon Urie ia my hero! Now I have to wait like a month for an update!!!! Ugh. I still totally love this story though

OMG YAY!!!!
I've missed this story so much!!
I want them to be together like now.

awww!!!!!! that was just sooo cute!!! :D!!
Brendon is just adorable!!! And such an amazing friend. :D That was soo sweet of him. I hope that Ryan feels better soon. It's just so sad seeing him so depressed. :(
Jake can seriously disappear and it wouldn't hurt at all I don't think...

Y'know, I can't remember the last time I commented on here...

Anyways, Brendon is such a dork.... I love it!

Love you, deary!

I've been gone for so long and I am so happy that this story was updated. I love your writing and this story. I obviously can't wait for more and Jake should die. The end. <3

Ohh. :( poor Ryan.
I have to say it, you know I do, Jake is a little bitch that deserves to just disappear. He pisses me off. Okay, I'm done... for the moment.
Awwww... Brendon. ^-^ He's a great friend. I love him. I love Ryan too, and I'm glad that he's finally seeing the light.
Poor things. I hope that things are better soon. :)
Good luck with your classes and such. :)

I love this story!
Hope you'll update soon :'3

An update! :) you are miraculous, do you know that? Well if you didn't, now you do. Cheer up, I'm sure you'll do well. Have an awesome day, because I'm sure by the end of this year, you'll smile and laugh at this day and how nervous you were. Have fun, update whenever you can, and don't stress out.

I understand that you don't want to hear this, but I hate him so so much. If there was one person in the world that I could kill right now, it would Jake.
I love Ryan. I think that he's ridiculously stupid right now, but I love him. AndBrendon was right!!!!!
As for details, it depends. If it's something that can add to the story and make a difference then by all means, write it. However, if there's really nothing more that the reader needs than to know that he was raped, then you choose whatever one makes you happy. :)
sorry. i'm not much help. :(
great job.

I just happened to fall upon this story, read it, and am now sad how long it has been since you have updated, hoping this comment may help an update come along?
Mmm, I think details are a mighty fine idea!
I really honestly cannot wait for another update, I hope there is one soon? *subscribes and crosses fingers*

idk if you're finished with the update, but I think you should go in further detail
Not just for all us weird perverts pahahhhaha
butt to show how controlling he is over Ryan :)

I really love your story. I read all of it. I'm sad it takes you a month to update though. I think you should go into the details. not because i'm creepy but I just think you should.

Maybe details but not to long as in the whole chapter long just maybe a few paragraphs. Because it's probably good to still add it in there as maybe more of a reminder of what's going on, and then so you can explain how Ryan feels because well jeez he's drunk and being raped by who he was in "love" with. He'd probably be to drunk and high to feel bad about it, but maybe he'll pass out after, wake up, puke, probably cry because, well that's terrible! It'll be very early in the morning he'll stumble home not feeling well, get in the room, Brendon awake and disappointed, but of course he'll be slightly sympathetic. He'll ask Ryan what's wrong he'll sob and not give a full story and fall asleep and when they wake up he tells Brendon and falls onto him crying because he can't believe Jake who he thought loved him, would do that. He feels sick to his stomach and well he's in pain because he was raped! Brendon is going over whether he should be angry or happy that he might have his friend back. Brendon's about to speak and bam! You end the chapter leaving people wondering what he's going to say. I don't know half of my idea sucks but I'm just saying this in case it gives you any fantastic ideas. P.S. This story is excellent and I love how we get to see/read as they grow older.