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  • choirgirlx3

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    wow, i love this story.
    January 29th, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • nelly626

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    love thisss =]
    January 8th, 2010 at 07:03am
  • narcotics

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    aww, she didn't believe Joe when he said he loves her
    December 15th, 2008 at 03:38am
  • narcotics

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    i love reading your stories. :mrgreen:
    this one was great, as all of them are. :tehe:
    December 4th, 2008 at 08:06pm
  • allygator18

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    this is SOO good!!
    love love love.
    December 3rd, 2008 at 12:31am
  • msrybusiness

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    aw man i hope they don't break up :[
    but I loved it anyways!
    November 19th, 2008 at 12:59pm
  • RestShameLove

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    Poor Nick, always being left out.
    Joe, you're a dick, that was a dick move.
    Kevin and Michelle, can I take a piece of you home? You're adorable.
    November 19th, 2008 at 06:08am
  • CasualtyofLove

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    Lol, xD I loved the whole piggy back ride. :P The first kiss cracked me up, no lie. lol. :o Joe cheated, but at least he's going to give her time to think. But it's way better he told her, than just keepin it to himself. [: I loved the entire chappter. ^^
    November 19th, 2008 at 05:26am
  • RestShameLove

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    My name is Michelle and my name is Anny...and we write a damn good story. That's what your summary should say!

    Oh, the old locked in the closest trick. Let's hope it works for the two of those kiddies. And what is Joe hiding, huh? What's he got going on?
    November 15th, 2008 at 09:15am
  • mycroftholmes

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    Haha this is awesome. Great job girls.

    and All Again For You by We The Kings is an amazing songgg. now I have to listen to their album (:
    November 14th, 2008 at 07:28pm
  • msrybusiness

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    haha that was so smart to lock them in a closet together!
    i can't to see how it goes. I hope everything gets better.
    November 14th, 2008 at 05:17am
  • Vira

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    I definently lovey dovey your story :)
    November 14th, 2008 at 03:26am
  • Vira

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    If I was in anny's postion I would probely.....Make-out with Joe right in front of everyone!Don't ask....I just have a thing for Jealous boyfriends.I know I'm werid!Eh I really dont know why I said that but.....I love your story anywayz!
    November 9th, 2008 at 06:33am
  • RestShameLove

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    Dirty fantasies and sucker punches.
    This chapter was my dream come true.
    November 9th, 2008 at 05:56am
  • aeeleigh

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    ...okay, so the mental picture of Joe swinging at a giant guy and missing...I almost peed myself I laughed so hard.

    It's so BELIEVABLE!! lol. I can just imagine him doing that. tehehehehehehe
    November 9th, 2008 at 05:42am
  • CasualtyofLove

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    When we try to be away from one another, we end up bumping into each other. Haha, Kevin and Michelle sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g first comes dirty thoughts then comes marrige then comes Kevin with a baby carrige. Lol. Okay I'm done with the song. xD This chapter was lengty and full of OMG! xD You seriously had me laughing at the begining. :P Bad Michelle, badd. xD Haha Same goes for Kevin. (: I woveddd it. ^^
    November 9th, 2008 at 04:45am
  • msrybusiness

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    loved it!
    i hope this brings joe and anny together
    November 9th, 2008 at 04:41am
  • msrybusiness

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    awesome!
    i can feel something brewing up between kevin and michelle :]
    i hope everything works out between joe and anny
    November 8th, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • CasualtyofLove

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    Hahaha, nice thoughts Kevin. xD Fantalistic updatee! :D Ohyeahh. (: I loved the part where Nick was, "Do you want to rock, paper, scissors it for Joe?" xD That cracked me upp. (:
    November 8th, 2008 at 11:09am
  • aeeleigh

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    What is Anny's deal? I need to know. I think we kind of know...but I want them to be haaappy.

    And Kevin is just sextastic on stage, isn't he? If I were Michelle I wouldn't have stopped at incredible. I'd have gone straight to the edible...
    November 8th, 2008 at 09:55am