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  • Acid Milk

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    Why did thou not capitalize 'can't'? I'm pretty sure it should be.
    Anyways, I really liked your update! I love how Jake just decided they are going to forgive Ellie.
    February 21st, 2009 at 05:30pm
  • joonie.

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    Crazy stuff. At first, I was sure this was going to be nothing but a cutesy little romance story. However, you really surprised me at the end and I loved it. It was so exciting and the end had such a big cliff hanger that I wanted to read on so bad. There were some grammar things to look into, but other than that, it was really great.
    February 19th, 2009 at 05:11am
  • Unpretty

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    Thanks Tessa :)
    February 18th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • Avada_Kedavra

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    Awesome new chapter! I really like it :)
    February 18th, 2009 at 10:49pm
  • bonvivante

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    yay update! hm so i liked it :] it was sweet, and that science teacher seems to take shape of the one teacher you were talking about. haha.
    February 17th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • bonvivante

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    yay update! hm so i liked it :] it was sweet, and that science teacher seems to take shape of the one teacher you were talking about. haha.
    February 17th, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Aw! This one's sooooo sweet. I can't understand how you keep thinking these up!
    February 17th, 2009 at 04:05pm
  • Acid Milk

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    I would know, I was there.
    February 17th, 2009 at 02:51pm
  • Unpretty

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    :D Thanks. It took me a while to get it written, for some reason... glad you liked it.
    February 17th, 2009 at 02:49pm
  • Acid Milk

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    Aw! That was a very sweet chapter.
    February 17th, 2009 at 02:48pm
  • Unpretty

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    Okay, okay! No need to be hostile XD
    Lol.
    And okay, okay I shalt. I was gonna update again tonight anyways.
    So, hello new unknown reader. I'm glad you've decided to make yourself known.
    February 15th, 2009 at 01:33am
  • Katie_Bugs

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    YOU WILL NOT END THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!

    THOGH YOU WILL UPDATE MORE OFTEN
    February 15th, 2009 at 01:15am
  • Unpretty

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    Thanks crazypeoplearebeast! I had to get that little fact in and this chapter seemed perfect :)

    And omg thank you sooo much GreyWings!! I love love love it! You get, like, fifty million gold stars for making it for me! :)
    February 14th, 2009 at 04:10pm
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Okies... so I saw your banner and thought, I should make you one! I get jealous easy like that. So here it is;

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    http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr231/xXGreyWingsXx/RedRibbons.jpg

    Hope you like it!

    Plus, I just realised, coming to the end of that marvellous chapter, that you'd asked for a banner. So there we go! I anticipated your request! :mrgreen:
    February 14th, 2009 at 03:30pm
  • SlowChildrenAtPlay

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    Yaysers! You updated! Lol.
    I love this story. That was a twist.... at the end. Lol.
    Can't wait for the next update!
    February 14th, 2009 at 03:22pm
  • Unpretty

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    Hi
    I think it's nice to read my story when you have no life C:
    Yes, it's true Bryler has been there more.
    Hah, nah. Just gonna tell her a secret.
    It's okay.
    Me too lol.
    February 14th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • loverfayce.

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    HALLO
    I have just read this story. it's 1:19AM, and I officially have no life.
    it's really good. I like Brylar better, because he's been there for more.
    I thought Jake was gonna rape her :OO
    no such luck.
    that was mean.
    I need SLEEP.
    February 14th, 2009 at 08:21am
  • Unpretty

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    Thanks to both of you :)
    This was slightly rushes but it shalt have to do.
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • Grinny Ginny

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    This seems good... I just finished chapter four. I like this story. I am subscribing :)
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:27am
  • bonvivante

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    great update. i love it :]
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:15am